Trailer so far

Here is our trailer so far:



At the moment there are still a couple of glitches that need fixing, such as faulty transitions and text that needs breaking up/lasts too long. We also need to fit the editing so that it's more in time with the soundtrack, which we will do once we have fixed the transitions. There is also a strange tapping noise, but the school's I.T technicians should be able to help us get rid of this. Another thing that really hasn't worked is the shot of the text message; the picture hasn't come out properly, and it does look just like a photo, as well as lasting too long on screen. As a solution to this problem we are going to do some more filming, replacing the screenshot of the text message with actual footage of it being written. We also need to add more institutional information.