Audience feedback for second draft of trailer

We have created a Facebook group with our trailer posted in it and invited people to give us feedback, so as to give us more of an idea of possible improvement. Here is some of the feedback we have had:

This feedback is extremely useful, as it gives us a better understanding of what needs to be changed; the majority of people have said that they don't like the combination of two different font styles, so, as the text in the old-fashioned font doesn't really add much to the plot, we have decided to remove it.